I like your website. I have minor suggestions. On the front page you state that you are exclusive to residential plumbing industry and to the left you state light commercial and residential. Second page second paragraph you start out the sentence with Because we stay up, we stay up on the latest makes a stronger statement. Some other places ;instead of stating ‘we ‘ insert your name. You deserve to be provided with the best possible service and technicians instead of we provide you the best service. When a client feels it is about him or her they feel better about you and what is being provided.
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I wondered about that too, last I heard you were a 2 truck operation, what if you just started a water heater replacement and your other guy is up to his ears in a repipe?
Also, maybe it's just me, but ..., the photo of you on the home page just seems a little smarky, eyebrows slightly raised, I don't know I just bet you could find a better photo of yourself. It just projects to me, some sort of not quite defined less than good attitude. Then again, I could be full of crap.
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